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Paul’s head lolled forward, the charred hole still smoking, and Annie fell to the ground trying to cradle him. She sobbed, crying “No! No! No!” Crystal’s arms were around her, as she sat on the ground, clutching her dead husband. People were trying to run but there was nowhere to go. Annie felt Jake fall atop her and Crystal. Oh, my God! He’s dead, too!
Ohh, so much tension here. Two guys dead? Powerful emotions, grief, shock, despair are shown very well.
ReplyDeleteGreat six! Lots of emotion. I'd definitely read more.
ReplyDeleteNice! There is so much happening, and all so fast. We definitely feel her frantic confusion. I bet there is no time for real fear... Until later, when it will all come crashing down upon her... :)
ReplyDeleteGreat six. I absolutely agree with the others. Very emotional
ReplyDeleteGreat Six! OMG I was hurt like really! Great description!
ReplyDeleteNice six!
ReplyDeletewow! so much going on here. intriguing!
ReplyDeleteDoesn't sound like anywhere I'd like to be! Hope someone finds a way out!
ReplyDeleteWow, great scene! Lots of action and emotion. Great job.
ReplyDeleteI agree with what Roberta said before. Reader is right in the middle of the confusion.
ReplyDeleteA very painful six. I guess the moon isn't as peaceful as it looks. :) Thanks for sharing and piquing our interest.
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